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Sheila M Duane's avatar

Rachel Hadas, my poetry mentor, taught me the value of formalism and wrestling my words into poetic forms. Here is my response to the prompt as a sonnet.

The Oracle in my Palms

I wanted to build a prophesy box

With an open space, a window to you

Without a barrier glass to see through.

To be touching palms on some equinox,

Full moon or half-moon. A paradox

between hands and moonbeams that tell fortunes.

Both lovely. Skin. Light. Only one is true.

Moon beam oracles move like ticking clocks.

But palm fortune tellers dance round circles

Around any light, around any doubt,

And push against misfortune day by day,

Whispering until the world is lulled

Soft, to my prophesy box and about

Their fortunes, your fortune, I tell and pray.

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Sending you lucky stars.

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